“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister broke his promise of getting a steel deal. The Liberals continue to allow the illegal dumping of foreign steel into the Canadian market. The Liberals refuse to cut the industrial carbon tax so that it is less expensive to work, produce and invest in Canada. The Liberals could take action today by taking Cleveland-Cliffs to court as they said they would. The Liberals’ lack of action makes Canada look weak. Will Canada continue to get bullied by Trump and his buddies, or will the Prime Minister file the lawsuit today?”
Statement grade
A
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Average 92 / 100
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 11 wordswe have started the legal process under the Investment Canada Act.2Reasoning · 12 wordsUnder the Investment Canada Act, we need to send a demand letter.5Claims · 8 wordsThe demand letter is supported by true evidence.Procedure · 12 wordsOf course, we can provide it to the Conservatives if they want.ProcedureClaims · 13 wordsIt is 15 pages long with all the evidence.1The undertakings are clear.Unearned certaintyReasoning · 33 wordsWe need to make sure that Cleveland-Cliffs protects the jobs at the Hamilton and Lake Erie facilities, 3but it also needs to abide by the commitment of advocating in favour of tariff-free access.4Positioning · 9 wordsIt cannot have its cake and eat it too.Positioning