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Lena Metlege Diab

61 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is high time that the Liberals and the Prime Minister explained the Liberals’ gross hypocrisy on immigration. Over the course of 11 years, the Liberals dismantled a system that was working well. The Prime Minister told the New York Times, but not the House, that it is time to increase immigration. Meanwhile, he is drawing closer to the European Union, which, coincidentally enough, has also lost control of immigration and lost track of millions of people. What is the agreement with the European Union? Is Canada deporting immigrants who follow the rules because ministers have mishandled the file, all to make room for more immigrants from the European Union?”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 23%Claims 46%Promise 31%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 14 wordswhat Canadians need to know is that we are masters in our own house.PositioningPartly on pointUnearned certainty Claims · 28 wordsWe are focusing on maintaining balance and control over our immigration system.Vague promise Just as the Prime Minister said in Strasbourg, no one dictates the path Canada should take.1 Promise · 19 wordsCanada is working to establish a closer transatlantic partnership that will give us greater independence in a changing world.2Partly on pointVague promise

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