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Mélanie Joly

88 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Linda Lapointe (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, 90% of Canada’s primary aluminum is produced in Quebec. The industry is much more than an economic driver; for our country, it is a strategic industry. Can the Minister of Industry tell us how our government is projecting jobs and defending Quebec’s aluminum industry?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 15%Claims 34%Positioning 14%Promise 27%Reasoning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsI want to thank my colleague from Rivière-des-Mille-Îles for her very important question.Thanks Claims · 7 wordsAluminum is one of our industrial strengths. Positioning · 12 wordsWe are proud of our workers in Saguenay—Lac-Saint-Jean and across the country.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 23 wordsLast Friday, I was in La Baie to announce a $160-million investment in Rio Tinto and Alouette, two of our major aluminum plants.1 Promise · 14 wordsWe are going to keep helping the large producers, Vague promisebut also the small ones, Reasoning · 9 wordswhich are being hit hard by the tariff war. Promise · 10 wordsWe are going to turn this crisis into an opportunity—Partly on point

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