“Mr. Speaker, today first nations chiefs are in Ottawa at the first nations-first ministers meeting. A main topic of concern is Bill C-39, which first nations across the country have called to be withdrawn, including BCAFN, UBCIC,Treaty 6, Onion Lake, NAN, COO, APNQL and the Iroquois Confederacy representing hundreds of thousands of first nations. Chiefs have been clear that the success of this meeting will be judged by the Liberal government’s actions. The resource minister says that he respects indigenous rights, so will he withdraw Bill C-39 now, yes or no?”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordsI have good news for the member.PositioningClaims · 59 wordsRight now, first nations are meeting with premiers from across this country and our government in one of the most historic first ministers meetings with first nations.1First nations shaped the agenda for this meeting and we value the opportunity to hear directly from the leaders addressing their concerns and having honest conversations about the opportunities and challenges ahead.2Positioning · 20 wordsWe are doing historic and important things in Canada and indigenous people will be important in shaping this future together.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise