“Mr. Speaker, I read Bill C‑40 and had the opportunity to give a speech here in the House. I think there is a bit of a misunderstanding about the bill. I will explain why. By creating this corporation, Bill C‑40 will provide support so businesses can bid on government contracts. I have worked with businesses. All too often, we see that they would like to bid on contracts, but they lack the financial means or do not have the necessary financial backing, from banks, for instance. That is what Bill C‑40 offers. It will support the entire sector in bidding on these contracts. It will provide loan insurance. It will make it possible to get loans. I would like my colleague to take the time to read the bill carefully and consider the impact it could have on the sector. It will support hundreds of businesses so they can bid on contracts.”
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 78. The grade is held to 77, 30 above Signal.
77 / 100, held down by Signal
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI thank my colleague for his question, ThanksProcedure · 22 wordsbecause it gives me the opportunity to mention something I did not address in my speech: the role of the procurement ombudsman.ProcedureClaims · 51 wordsThe ombudsman serves as an independent safeguard and external watchdog.1When a contract is disputed and a clear answer is required, a complaint can be filed with the ombudsman.2The ombudsman then appears before the Standing Committee on Government Operations and Estimates, helping us get to the bottom of the matter.3Partly on pointProcedure · 5 wordsWe correct course, Vague promiseif necessary.ProcedureClaims · 11 wordsWith the Defence Investment Agency, however, there will be no ombudsman.4Aside · 2 wordsJust imagine: AsideClaims · 2 wordsno transparency.Partly on pointPositioning · 31 wordsI fully agree with my colleague that we need to speed up the process, that we need to support this sector and give it a helping hand, but at what cost?PositioningReasoning · 12 wordsIt must certainly not be at the cost of undermining our democracy.