“Mr. Speaker, my hon. colleague reads bills carefully. I am wondering if she noted that it is not the Minister of Defence or even the associate minister for defence procurement who is actually named in the bill, but the Liberals will fill in the blanks later from cabinet.”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 80. The grade is held to 76, 30 above Relevance.
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Procedure 6%Reasoning 77%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordsagain, it goes to the fact that the bill feels like one that is half-baked.PositioningPartly on pointProcedure · 5 wordsThere are so many possibilities.ProcedureReasoning · 67 wordsI go back again to the fact that it would not just be an actual legal conflict of interest that we need to be concerned with.We need to also be concerned about appearances.Right now, I think that the government is actually leaving itself vulnerable to all kinds of unintended consequences if Parliament is not given a chance to have a substantially amended and improved bill.Partly on point