“Mr. Speaker, I am not necessarily opposed to a Crown corporation. There are many examples of Crown corporations that have worked well. There are examples of ones that have been quite the opposite. What it says in the bill is that the Defence Investment Agency “must”, not “may”, follow the direction of the newly created associate minister. Does the member worry that this is putting too much power, in fact almost ultimate power, into the control of one person, who would be in control of billions of dollars? Does that cause her concern?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 12 wordsthat is a lot of power in the hands of one minister, Positioning · 7 wordsbut the legislation is like a pretzel.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 42 wordsIt does not say that there will be an associate minister of natural defence for procurement.1It just says, in clause 13, that the Governor General “may” appoint an associate minister.2It is possible to imagine that there will never be one.