“Mr. Speaker, I hate to disappoint the Leader of the Conservative Party, but I can tell him that Canada is indeed not broken. Canada is still the best country in the world to call home. The Leader of the Opposition downplays the importance of investment, but just last month, in September, the Prime Minister and the Canadian government invited the world to come to Toronto. What we saw was half a trillion dollars of potential investment. That is completely unheard of in Canadian history. In collaborative co-operation, working with our provincial entities and major projects, again, we are nearing half a trillion dollars. The federal collaboration is working. Investment is looking into Canada like it has never before. It is time the Conservative Party recognized that Canada is—”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning, Respect and Clarity.
Average 71 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 36%Claims 18%Reasoning 19%Promise 28%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 32 wordsthe only thing broken is the record on the other side of the aisle.I have never heard any party so capable of bragging triumphantly of promises it has not yet kept.PositioningClaims · 24 wordsThe member got up and did not say that the investment had occurred.He said that it has the potential to one day occur.1Positioning · 17 wordsSomeday over the rainbow, if we just follow it, we might get to a pot of gold.PositioningPartly on pointReasoning · 26 wordsWe just need another summit, another signing ceremony, another photo op or a bunch of new made-up MBA isms, such as catalyze this and synergy that.Off pointPromise · 38 wordsWe will not build an economy out of buzzwords or unrealized promises.We will build an economy by getting the government out of the way and off the backs of the Canadian people to realize their real potential.Partly on pointNo reason givenVague promise