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Iqra Khalid

126 words · 5 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Greeting 7%Claims 17%Procedure 10%Promise 66%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 9 wordstoday I rise to congratulate the mayor-elect, Alvin Tedjo, 1GreetingClaims · 21 wordsas our new mayor of Mississauga. He is a person of conviction and one whom I look forward to working with. Procedure · 13 wordsThe people of Mississauga made the issues very clear: affordability, safety and jobs.Procedure Promise · 83 wordsI look forward to working with our new mayor and our collective councillors to ensure that we deliver for the people of Mississauga.Vague promise These issues affect our safety and our entire community, and they must be addressed through consensus and through collaboration between everybody who has stood up and raised their hand to run and to serve in our community, so I want to thank everybody in our Mississauga community for coming together and for ensuring that Mississauga continues to be Canada strong.

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