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Mike Dawson

158 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordson Friday, October 16, in Miramichi, we honoured the retirement of Court of King’s Bench Justice Fred Ferguson, KC.1Thanks Positioning · 14 wordsAlthough born in Dalhousie, he has long been regarded as one of our own.Positioning Claims · 19 wordsAfter law school, he worked as a Crown prosecutor for three decades alongside colleagues Jack Walsh and Bill Morrissey.2 Positioning · 15 wordsHe prosecuted some of the most serious and widely noted criminal cases in the country.Positioning Claims · 47 wordsAppointed to the provincial court in 2003 and elevated to the King’s Bench in 2008, he is widely respected across Canada for his unmatched knowledge of the criminal law.3 He earned a reputation for being approachable by young lawyers and by all those who appeared before him. Positioning · 3 wordsColourful and courageous, PositioningClaims · 20 wordsand sometimes called “the oracle”, he is a devoted husband to Debbie and a proud father to Adam and Jess. The ask · 21 wordsI ask the House to extend its best wishes to Justice Fred Ferguson on a distinguished career and a well-deserved retirement.

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