Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jenna Sudds

120 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

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Claims 18%Thanks 56%Promise 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 4 wordsOttawa voted last night, 1Thanks · 43 wordsand today I rise on behalf of my Ottawa MP colleagues to congratulate Mayor Mark Sutcliffe and all the city councillors who were elected yesterday.2 Special congratulations go to the three new councillors joining the table: Erin Coffin, Joanne Chianello and Chelsea Walton.3Thanks Claims · 17 wordsOttawa made history last night because, for the first time, women will outnumber men around the table.4 Thanks · 21 wordsThat is a milestone worth celebrating, and one that reflects the strong women who lead and build communities in our city.Thanks Promise · 27 wordsWe look forward to working with Mayor Sutcliffe and the council to tackle the challenges ahead and to continue to build a strong and vibrant national capital.Vague promise Thanks · 3 wordsI congratulate all.Thanks Promise · 5 wordsLet us get to work.

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