A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 82%Positioning 3%Reasoning 12%The ask 4%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 132 wordsI would like to tell the House and Canadians about Bob Gibson, who is a retired air force pilot.1He and his wife, Charmaine, are on Parliament Hill today.2Their son followed in his dad’s footsteps and is also a pilot in the air force.3Something members might not know is that members of the Canadian Armed Forces are more likely to be diagnosed with ALS.4Unfortunately, Bob has an ALS diagnosis and is worried that his son, who followed in his footsteps of serving the country, may also face the same diagnosis.The ALS community is calling for a $50-million investment from the Government of Canada, 5and I support its request.The funding would open clinical trials, help researchers understand the disease and explore the link between military service and ALS.Positioning · 5 wordsWe know that time counts.PositioningClaims · 21 wordsMembers of the House will remember our late hon. colleague Mauril Bélanger, who had nine months from diagnosis to his passing.6Reasoning · 22 wordsWe can do more than offer hope and best wishes to people living with ALS and to those who serve our country.The ask · 7 wordsWe can help fund research and hope.