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Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe

152 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 20 wordsI rise today to pay tribute to Jean‑Eudes Senneville, who passed away on October 4 at the age of 86.1Greeting Positioning · 21 wordsA disciplined businessman and visionary, Mr. Senneville was a true pioneer of the wild blueberry industry in my riding of Lac‑Saint‑Jean.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsHe was a community builder who helped shape the blueberry economy for more than half a century, Positioning · 8 wordsbut his legacy extends far beyond his company.Positioning Claims · 8 wordsIn 1979, he opened his first freezing plant, 2Positioning · 8 wordswhich became the cornerstone of Quebec Wild Blueberries.Positioning Claims · 20 wordsNearly 50 years later, four state-of-the-art processing plants are helping our wild blueberries reach markets far away from our region.3 Positioning · 38 wordsAlthough his forthright manner occasionally ruffled a few feathers, he forged lasting partnerships and left an indelible mark on the blueberry industry. Mr. Senneville’s influence on Lac‑Saint‑Jean and Quebec will continue to be felt for years to come.Positioning Thanks · 12 wordsTo his family and loved ones, we offer our most sincere condolences.Thanks

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