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Joël Lightbound

162 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Yves-François Blanchet (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, in the wake of the Parti Québécois’ election victory, the Prime Minister telephoned the Premier of Quebec to offer his congratulations and express his desire to work together on key priorities, including the economy, housing, support for workers and homelessness. It was a gesture of goodwill, but that collaborative spirit appears to have been short-lived. How can the Prime Minister justify muzzling the Premier of Quebec on his own turf, during the Canada–Europe summit taking place this week in Montreal?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 38%Claims 55%Promise 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 39 wordsI will leave it to the leader of the Bloc Québécois to choose his own analogies, but I believe that is a bit of a stretch. Does the member know what I am hearing from the Quebeckers I meet?PositioningPartly on point Claims · 31 wordsI am talking about the Quebeckers who elected 44 Liberal members from Quebec, including the recent election in Chicoutimi—Le Fjord, 3where the Liberal candidate received more than 50% of the vote.4Off point Positioning · 22 wordsThey are saying that they want us to continue diversifying our markets and strengthening the resilience of the Quebec and Canadian economies.Positioning Claims · 58 wordsThey are encouraged to see that exports to markets outside the United States have increased by 11% over the past year.2 They are pleased that, over the past year, Canada has signed 20 trade and security agreements with countries around the world.1 It is the Government of Canada doing that work, in partnership with the provinces and territories, Promise · 12 wordsand we will continue that work in the interest of all Canadians.Partly on point

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