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Tim Hodgson

69 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is all well and good to build a pipeline to the Pacific 10 years from now with tens of billions of dollars of taxpayer money, but that does not stop us from also allowing a project that could begin today and that could start shipping oil in two years on a rail track that already exists, without any taxpayer subsidy required. There is only one thing standing in the way, and that is the Prime Minister and his tanker ban. Will the Prime Minister get out of the way, vote for Conservative Bill C-264, get rid of the tanker ban and get our oil to the world?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%The ask 72%Positioning 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsI will repeat it.Procedure The ask · 50 wordsThe Conservative leader can join us with indigenous people and help us build the sunrise pipeline expansion.1 He can join us and help us build the Taylor to Gordondale expansion.2 He can join us and build the Pacific link.3 He can join us and build the north coast transmission line.4 Positioning · 15 wordsInstead of fighting indigenous people, he should work with indigenous people to build Canada strong.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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