“Mr. Speaker, the federal deficit will reach $63 billion this year. National interest payments will cost the equivalent of $6,000 for a Canadian family of four. However, the government continues to run up deficits while families are struggling to make ends meet. One of my constituents wrote to me and said that she is collecting empties to be able to fill up her gas tank to pick up her daughter. That is what life is like under the Liberals. I asked the Prime Minister to appear before the Standing Committee on Finance. Will he accept my invitation?”
Statement grade
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning, Respect and Clarity is 70. The grade is held to 44, 30 above Relevance. Reasoning rests on one conclusion, too few to hold the grade down.
44 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordsno one can remain indifferent to the account he shared concerning his constituent.Positioning · 21 wordsKeeping in mind those families who are struggling to make ends meet, for example, let us look at the Conservative reality.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 58 wordsAt every turn, they vote against measures that have a real impact on people’s lives.Logical leapI am thinking of the member opposite and, more specifically, his riding of Richmond—Arthabaska—des-Sources, where 20,587 children are receiving an average of $4,176 a year through the Canada child benefit, 1and 34,563 of his constituents are benefiting from the Canadian dental care plan.2Off pointThanks · 9 wordsI know he is very active in his riding.ThanksThe question · 20 wordsDoes he tell the people he meets that he has consistently voted against all these measures that are helping residents?3Off point