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Jill McKnight

85 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Braedon Clark (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, as a member of the Standing Committee on Veterans Affairs, we have studied many issues of importance to veterans and their families. These discussions will continue informing our understanding of the modern veteran. They will shape how we respond to the unique realities veterans face following military service, and they remind us that we must support veterans and their families beyond just Remembrance Day on November 11. Could the Minister of Veterans Affairs share how she and our government are advancing recognition and commemoration of our service members?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 22%Claims 49%Reasoning 28%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsremembrance lives on when one generation inspires the next.PositioningOff point Claims · 42 wordsAs the Royal Canadian Legion’s poppy campaign begins, Canadians will pause to honour the Canadian Armed Forces members who have served and sacrificed.1 This year, our remembrance can also take inspiration from Chaelyn Han, winner of the National Youth Remembrance Poster Contest.2 Reasoning · 24 wordsHer artwork reminds us that remembrance is not only about looking back, Partly on pointbut also carrying forward the stories and sacrifices that shaped our country. Positioning · 10 wordsLet us wear our poppies with pride and carry commemoration—PositioningOff point

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