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Tamara Kronis

142 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Mr. Speaker, to my colleague from Vancouver Island, this may seem out of the blue, but in my riding, some wonderful teachers who used to teach shop are really worried about the decline in access for young people to learn trades. They have an idea that I am working on, and I am asking about it in case other members are interested in working on it. Twenty-four Sussex Drive will need a major rebuild or renovation. The idea of this team of teachers is to get a team of youth from across Canada to rebuild the Prime Minister’s house, learning trades, being paid as they do it, living in Ottawa and making it truly a project of national interest. Does the hon. member for Nanaimo—Ladysmith think it might be a good idea?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Thanks 6%Claims 39%Promise 35%Procedure 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsone of the things I love about our communities on Vancouver Island is that we have an incredible array of creative suggestions.Positioning Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank the member for that one.Thanks Claims · 23 wordsUnfortunately, that will not be up to me. That will be up to the committee that is planning the renovation of 24 Sussex.1 Promise · 32 wordsI would be delighted to join with the member in pursuing this proposal and encouraging the government to make use of the skills and creativity of our youth in every way possible.Vague promise Procedure · 6 wordsI would add one more thing.Procedure Claims · 33 wordsPart of the concern we have about our young people right now is that they spend so much time on screens, and they are not developing gross motor skills, except in their thumbs.Partly on point Promise · 17 wordsI would love to see more youth getting the opportunity to learn shop and trades in school.

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