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Jagsharan Singh Mahal

992 words · 60 sentences · 67 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
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Procedure 4%Thanks 4%Claims 48%Positioning 5%Reasoning 24%The ask 10%Anecdote 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 23 wordsthis evening I rise to discuss the issue of youth unemployment, an issue that I know affects many Edmontonians and far more Canadians.Procedure Thanks · 38 wordsI would first like to thank all members of the Standing Committee on Human Resources, Skills and Social Development and the Status of Persons with Disabilities for their hard work over seven meetings to draft this 10th report.1Thanks Claims · 48 wordsCanada has historically been a country where people build, discover and invest. However, for the last decade, Canada has experienced the opposite. More often, corporations are taking capital investment south of our border and students from our top universities are leaving to work on projects outside the country. Positioning · 5 wordsCanada needs to do better.Positioning Reasoning · 65 wordsAs parliamentarians, we must take an active role in shaping the environment for youth to succeed economically.Vague promise That does not mean planning an economy for them. Rather, it means developing smart, pointed policy aimed at fixing a broken system of brain drain and a major lack of economic opportunities. As they say, the first step to fixing a problem is acknowledging that there is one. The ask · 21 wordsThe 16 recommendations set forward by this report are an important start and, therefore, should be concurred in by the government.2 Claims · 84 wordsIn Edmonton Southeast, I am hearing more often from parents about their children having difficulty being able to find work, and the data supports these parental concerns. In August of this year, Canada lost 42,000 jobs, including 19,000 jobs for young Canadians aged 15 to 24.3 Similarly, in September 2026, Canada lost another 68,000 jobs, with youth accounting for 48,000 of those lost positions.4 In just two months, youth employment declined by 67,000 jobs.5 That is around 61% of the total decline in employment.6 Reasoning · 8 wordsThese numbers are concerning and call for action. Positioning · 13 wordsConservatives and my hon. colleague from Sherwood Park, Alberta, have offered real solutions.Positioning Claims · 117 wordsOur four-point plan includes unleashing the economy, fixing training, fixing the system where high-skilled newcomers compete for entry-level jobs and building homes where the work is necessary to create employment opportunities for youth. Conservatives have repeatedly called on the Liberal government to reduce red tape and taxes so that Canada can return to a simple but effective regulatory environment that supports the creation and growth of youth employment. Multiple witnesses cited in this report conclude that heavy taxation limits the capacity to invest in new technology and expansion. In fact, one witness was even cited as saying that Canada is no longer an attractive place to start a career or business due to our sluggish economic environment.7 Reasoning · 7 wordsWe cannot accept this assertion as fact. Positioning · 7 wordsWe must deliver better for our youth.PositioningVague promise Reasoning · 12 wordsEmployers must be encouraged to hire, build and keep workers in Canada. Claims · 8 wordsYouth are most affected by changing market forces, Reasoning · 15 wordsso entrepreneurs must see Canada as a reliable and predictable market to grow their business. Claims · 10 wordsNow, more than ever before, companies can move between countries. The ask · 29 wordsIt is time for the Liberal government to address these issues by creating a landscape that attracts and retains those companies rather than letting them go somewhere more business-friendly. Claims · 35 wordsFurthermore, this report explicitly calls upon the government to acknowledge the importance that resource development and manufacturing play in our economy. The Liberal government has actively worked to block major resource projects in this country.8 Positioning · 15 wordsAnnouncements are nothing but announcements, and more paperwork does not get Canada back on track.Positioning The ask · 17 wordsWe need faster approvals, shorter timelines and a greater acknowledgement of the people who build our country. Positioning · 6 wordsTradespeople are the backbone of Canada.Positioning Claims · 10 wordsWe cannot build our roads and our homes without them. Reasoning · 12 wordsWe need a Canada where skilled trades work is celebrated and honoured. Claims · 16 wordsIn our economy, these jobs can be some of the highest-paying and most rewarding for youth. Reasoning · 20 wordsThere needs to be a shift so the trades are neither looked down upon nor compared to a university education. Claims · 9 wordsEach is a unique track that offers positive outcomes. The ask · 26 wordsThe pipefitter or electrician needs a clear pathway from training to apprenticeship and certification, and they must feel that their work is worthwhile as a career. Procedure · 14 wordsThe final point I want to mention is the certification of immigrants in Canada.Procedure Anecdote · 48 wordsLike many members of the House, I was not born in Canada. However, I always saw Canada as a country of hope, opportunity and prosperity. When I arrived as a young man, I was lucky to be a trained lawyer, and the pathways to credential transfer were clear.Anecdote Claims · 88 wordsThis is not the case for most jobs, which is an unfortunate reality that has held Canada back for decades. The HUMA report finds that this holdup is forcing new Canadians to compete with youth for entry-level jobs.9 The 2021 census data showed that 25.8% of immigrants with foreign degrees were working in jobs requiring, at most, a high school diploma.10 This stat reflects Canada’s broader productivity problem. Our economy loses out on increased tax revenues from high-wage jobs, and entry-level jobs become unnecessarily competitive for young Canadians. Reasoning · 37 wordsThis scenario is all too common and, frankly, benefits no one. Conservatives have been asking for greater pathways for skilled immigrants to gain accreditation and equivalency training. A new framework would benefit the economy as a whole. Claims · 50 wordsIt is not a secret that our youth are struggling.Unearned certainty Youth without jobs means more lineups at food banks. In March 2026, Food Banks Canada reported that 33% of visitors were under the age of 18.11 This is more than a 6% increase from the same time a year before.12 Reasoning · 66 wordsYoung Canadians should not have to leave Canada to find opportunity because our economy fails to deliver. The recommendations set out by this 10th report provides a starting point for addressing these challenges, from reducing barriers to employment to strengthening apprenticeship pathways and improving credential recognition. Concurrence in this report is an opportunity for Parliament to acknowledge the seriousness of youth unemployment and demand meaningful action. The ask · 9 wordsThe government must now turn these recommendations into results. Positioning · 4 wordsYoung Canadians are waiting.Positioning

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