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Jagsharan Singh Mahal

77 words · 3 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker. I have to come back to the issue of completion grants for the trades. Completion grants were started by Prime Minister Harper. It was a very successful policy and strongly supported. The Minister of Jobs and Families came to committee and said that completion grants were not working. It is on the record. The Minister of Jobs and Families said they were not working. The government cancelled completion grants, then it relaunched them under a new name. It is like the Liberals said, “We came up with this great idea. They are called completion grants, which had been cancelled for a few months.” The minister assured us at committee that we should not worry, as they were going to connect the funding to ensure that nobody lost out in the intervening period. These are the facts. The government has no new ideas. It is repeatedly celebrating things that have existed in this country for decades, and its approach is failing. It is more announcements, and the government is cancelling and then renaming old Conservative programs. There is work to do. When will the government get with the program and actually do the work that needs to be done?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 16%Positioning 29%The ask 22%Reasoning 34%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordsI wholeheartedly agree with the member’s analysis of the situation right now.Thanks Positioning · 22 wordsThe government tries to use our ideas, but then all of a sudden it cuts half of them or applies them half-heartedly.Positioning The ask · 17 wordsIf the government has to apply our programs, let us be honest about it and apply them, Reasoning · 26 wordsso Canadians can have good paying jobs and earn good cheques, and so youth can also be a productive part of society and have well-paying jobs.Partly on point

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