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Elizabeth May

655 words · 25 sentences · 43 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 4%Claims 56%Positioning 17%Thanks 3%The ask 3%Anecdote 7%Procedure 5%Reasoning 3%The question 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 24 wordsit is an honour to rise at this hour in Adjournment Proceedings to pursue a question I asked in question period on May 5.1Greeting Claims · 16 wordsWe were nearly at the anniversary of June 3, 2019, the date of the long-fought-for report.2 Positioning · 19 wordsIt was such a traumatic experience just to get an inquiry into missing and murdered indigenous women and girls.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsThat inquiry wrapped up, and as I asked my question on May 5, I noted that it was almost seven years ago that the report of the inquiry into missing and murdered indigenous women, girls and two-spirit plus people had been given to the government. Positioning · 4 wordsBack then, we hoped.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsThe government of the day said it would do its very best and certainly was committed to achieving all of the calls for justice within the report. There were 231 calls for justice.3 Positioning · 41 wordsIn other reports, one might just call them recommendations, but I think it was powerful that they were called calls for justice. The horror of the number of missing and murdered indigenous women and girls in this country remains with us, PositioningClaims · 26 wordsbecause many of those women and girls are still missing, and many more have gone missing since we got the report back on June 3, 2019. Thanks · 18 wordsThe response I got from the Minister of Crown-Indigenous Relations was compassionate, caring and thoughtful, as is she.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsShe did not provide a number of how many of the calls for justice had been achieved. She did, of course, express the concern that justice, Positioning · 20 wordsas she said, was “not with respect to just one project, but a life we need to continue to live”, PositioningThe ask · 8 wordsand that violence against indigenous people must end. Claims · 27 wordsHowever, it remains the fact that here we are in late October 2026, and we still are dealing with the reality that women are missing and murdered. Anecdote · 13 wordsI have a lot of friends from all kinds of backgrounds, close friends, AnecdoteClaims · 31 wordsbut it is only among my indigenous women friends that it is rare to find a friend who is indigenous in this country who has not been beaten up and abused. Anecdote · 30 wordsOne of my close friends, I thought I knew about her life until she said, “I never told you about the time I was left for dead in a dumpster.”Anecdote Positioning · 17 wordsShe said it as if it was a sort of normalized experience for indigenous women and girls, PositioningClaims · 8 wordsand it is, in fact, far too common. Procedure · 31 wordsI tried to find a number for tonight’s debate, from Statistics Canada and other sources, as to how many indigenous women and girls have gone missing since we got the recommendations, ProcedureClaims · 47 wordswhich have not been fulfilled. It was hard to find a number because Statistics Canada and sources do not necessarily agree, but it is a large number of women and girls from the indigenous communities of this country who have gone missing since the report came out. Procedure · 3 wordsI will quote, ProcedureClaims · 62 wordsbecause it was at least authoritative, the Native Women’s Association of Canada, which states, “Despite half a decade passing since the release of the National Action Plan, the implementation of the 231 Calls for Justice has been insufficient.”6 It states that “many federal commitments remain delayed, fragmented, 7or difficult to measure in ways that reflect the realities Indigenous communities [face] every day.” Positioning · 9 wordsWhat we are looking at is an ongoing crisis.Positioning Claims · 46 wordsWe have recommendations that were really important and sweeping, such as bringing in a guaranteed livable income, such as ensuring that there is safe and efficient transportation in rural and remote Canada, a recommendation that would serve all parts of society in rural and remote Canada, 45Reasoning · 21 wordswhere people cannot get from A to B unless they own a car, other than hitchhiking and putting themselves at risk. The ask · 12 wordsIt is now, with a few seconds left, time to ask again. The question · 18 wordsWhat is the level of commitment of this government? Will we hear a commitment to achieve these recommendations?

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