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Ryan Turnbull

141 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Mr. Speaker, I do not think the parliamentary secretary nor any minister would claim that this has been accomplished. I think we can agree that the work is, of necessity, going to be partial, but I am not convinced there is a sufficient level of urgency from the government for the fact that people, especially women and girls, continue to go missing all the time. There is police training and the kinds of supports required under the calls for justice, including trauma-informed therapists going right away to help a woman who has been assaulted or attacked get through that process. Those kinds of steps were very specific in the report, and they really must be treated with urgency, because every single attack of a woman hitchhiking on a rural road is something that was avoidable, predictable and preventable.”
Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Procedure 10%Claims 33%Promise 39%Reasoning 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI agree with the member opposite that the issue requires urgency and sustained effort.Procedure Claims · 17 wordsThe crisis of missing and murdered indigenous women, girls and 2SLGBTQIA people demands urgent and sustained action, Promise · 8 wordsand we remain firmly committed to ending it.Vague promise Claims · 17 wordsOf the 231 calls for justice, 215 are directly related to the federal government in some capacity, 1Reasoning · 7 wordsand we are acting on that responsibility.Vague promise Claims · 13 wordsAs I have said, almost three-quarters have been started and are in progress.2 Promise · 47 wordsWe are making targeted investments that translate into real support, safe places to go, and culturally informed care and services identified by communities themselves. This includes support for indigenous-led organizations, further investments in a red dress alert pilot and expanding shelters and transitional housing across the country.3 Reasoning · 18 wordsEverything we are doing is built on working together, being accountable and following the leadership of indigenous partners.

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