Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Dominique O'Rourke

144 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Claims 80%Thanks 7%Positioning 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 100 wordsteens today are awesome. Today I welcome 60 students from the Upper Grand District School Board who participate in the Beyond Borders leadership development program, an innovative grade 12 experiential learning semester that exemplifies how learning extends beyond books and classroom walls.1 Through partnerships with businesses, universities, charities and community organizations, students tackle real-world challenges, explore future pathways and, most importantly, discover their own potential. Beyond Borders not only prepares students for what comes next but also teaches them the importance of giving back. Since the program’s inception in 2012, participants have raised more than $1 million for community causes.2 Thanks · 10 wordsI thank teachers Mike Parsons, Matt Mulhern and Cynthia McQueen.3Thanks Claims · 15 wordsBeyond Borders students prove that age is not a requirement for leadership, generosity or impact. Positioning · 19 wordsThe future is not waiting for them; they are already shaping it. Guelph and Canada are better for it.Positioning

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