“No, Mr. Speaker, the minister wants to build America strong, because the cost of the majority of the biofuels that the government is forcing refiners to purchase with this 16¢-a-litre tax is not going to Canadian farmers. It is going to megacorporations south of the border. On this day when the Bank of Canada governor says that food prices are rising because of higher diesel costs, the Prime Minister is imposing a tax on Canadians at the pump and on truckers who deliver us our food. Why is he putting that money in the pockets of the Americans?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 71. The grade is held to 57, 30 above Relevance.
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 12%Claims 51%Positioning 25%The ask 12%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsI would like to correct my last statement.ProcedureClaims · 20 wordsCanola prices are up 8% because of clean fuel regs, 1but they are up 30% this year.2Thirty per cent, Positioning · 12 wordsand the Leader of the Opposition is trying to talk us down.PositioningClaims · 14 wordsWe have been helping the farmers.We have been helping the people in Alberta.Positioning · 5 wordsHe is talking against them.PositioningThe ask · 8 wordsWe should work together and build Canada strong.Off point