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Joël Lightbound

105 words · 6 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Mario Simard (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, there is a fourth certainty: the federal government’s lack of respect for Quebec. Whether a certain minister likes it or not, geopolitics is not a matter of federal jurisdiction. Quebec has the right to conduct its own international relations in all areas that fall wholly or partly under its jurisdiction. That is the Gérin-Lajoie doctrine. The Prime Minister’s insulting attitude and his Minister of Industry’s outlandish statements undermine decades of Quebec and Canadian foreign policy. Will the Prime Minister reconsider, respect the Quebec nation and invite the Premier of Quebec to speak at the summit?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 10%Claims 76%Positioning 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordslet us talk about the Bloc Québécois’s outrage over everything.Procedure Claims · 80 wordsAll summer long, the Bloc criticized us for doing too much for Quebec: Logical leaptoo much for infrastructure, with $10 billion in investments; 1too much for the Davie shipyard in Lévis, with 5,000 jobs in Quebec; 2too much for Alstom in La Pocatière and Saint‑Bruno‑de‑Montarville. The Bloc Québécois criticized us for supporting the Churchill Falls project, 3which will ensure prosperity for generations of Quebeckers.No reason given It is criticizing us for going ahead with the high-speed rail project, 4which will help build Quebec.No reason given Positioning · 15 wordsThe Bloc Québécois is busy stoking division and outrage. Our government is busy building Quebec.PositioningOff point

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