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Mélanie Joly

72 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Ned Kuruc (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Cleveland-Cliffs’s CEO admitted that he bought Stelco because Canadian steel was hurting his American business. He admitted to blocking Stelco from selling steel to the United States, and now 350 Hamilton steelworkers are losing their jobs. Conservatives demand that the Liberals take Stelco to court, stop illegal steel dumping and secure a tariff-free steel deal. Instead, the Liberals keep sending love letters and extending deadlines. Stelco’s CEO is protecting American profits and his American workers. What are the Liberals doing to protect ours?”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Claims 64%Positioning 29%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordslet us be serious here.Procedure Claims · 30 wordsThere are people right now who are asking whether they can pay their mortgage. There are people who are asking themselves whether they will be able to pay their bills.Partly on point Positioning · 15 wordsThat is why we did not stop. We did not wait. The Conservatives are late.PositioningOff point Claims · 16 wordsWe have been at it and starting the legal process for more than 10 days now.1 Positioning · 6 wordsThey should, basically, read the news.PositioningOff point

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