“Mr. Speaker, the measure of a success in this country should be how many government programs Canadians get off, not get put on to. Debt interest is the fastest-growing expense, more than health care and more than the military. It is the money that gets sent to the Prime Minister’s banker, bondholder and Brookfield buddies every single year. This guy said he would spend less, but he is all talk and no results. That is why 2.35 million Canadians visit a food bank every single month. The Prime Minister doubled Justin Trudeau’s deficit. Is he looking to double food bank lines too?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 71 / 100
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Promise 38%Claims 51%Positioning 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Promise · 18 wordson this side of the House, we are going to continue to focus on affordability measures for Canadians.Vague promiseClaims · 38 wordsThe groceries and essentials benefit will put up to $1,900 in the pockets of families.1We cut the taxes, 2and they voted against it, of course, for 22 million Canadians.3We paused the federal excise tax on gas.4Promise · 10 wordsWe will continue to focus on and deliver for Canadians.Partly on pointVague promisePositioning · 8 wordsThat side can continue with the empty rhetoric.PositioningOff point