“Mr. Speaker, we live in an era when global events have local impacts. The people of University—Rosedale understand that there are forces affecting our economy that are beyond our control. They do not want to hear parliamentarians talk down our economy, our businesses and our workers. They want us to address affordability by building on our strengths and our shared values. Can the Secretary of State for the CRA and Financial Institutions tell us about the work under way to make life more affordable for people in Toronto and across this great country?”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning, Respect and Clarity. Reasoning rests on one conclusion, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 69 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 23%Promise 35%Claims 25%Positioning 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI want to thank the member for University—Rosedale for her strong advocacy on the disability tax credit and automatic federal benefits.ThanksPromise · 12 wordsWe are going to build a strong, resilient economy for all Canadians.Vague promiseClaims · 5 wordsWe are attracting outside investment.Promise · 7 wordsWe are going to build Canada strong.Partly on pointVague promiseClaims · 18 wordsWe are cutting taxes for 22 million Canadians.1The groceries and essentials benefit is offering $1,900 for families.2Promise · 13 wordsWe will continue to focus on and deliver on affordability measures for Canadians.Vague promisePositioning · 16 wordsOn this side of the House, Canadians know who stands with them.It is our side.PositioningOff point