“Mr. Speaker, Canada has the oil the world needs, the workers to produce it and the rail lines to get it to the Pacific. Strathcona Resources is ready to ship up to 250,000 barrels per day through Prince Rupert to global markets. This would mean more jobs, a stronger Canadian economy and more customers for our oil, and the best part is that no government subsidies are necessary. In fact, this is a company that is ready to bring in its own private dollars and make it happen. The only thing standing in the way is the Liberals’ tanker ban. Will they do the right thing, advocate for the well-being of Canadians and remove it?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 69. The grade is held to 62, 30 above Relevance.
62 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 13 wordslet me share what the new Conservative Premier of British Columbia just said: 1ProcedureClaims · 32 words“Our government’s focus is on the project in front of us....Pacific Link has been declared in the national interest, it takes a southern route, 23and it will create...jobs [for] British Columbia.”4Positioning · 29 wordsOther Conservatives seem to be able to get on board and support Pacific link.Partly on pointThese guys just look for opportunities to fight.We are interested in building, not fighting.PositioningThe question · 6 wordsWhy do they not join us?Off point
