“Mr. Speaker, last week, Parks Canada announced it is cutting the 55-year search and rescue K9 program in Banff National Park. This program is essential to park visitor safety, responding to thousands of calls. Leroy, the last rescue dog, tracked 156 individuals and found 57 people over seven years. This is a small team that has a huge impact on visitor safety. These dogs cover areas 30 to 50 times faster than human rescuers. They are essential to the safety in our parks. Why is the minister cutting vital safety programs while her executives received millions of dollars last year?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 32%Reasoning 20%Promise 48%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordswe thank the federal public service employees for their dedication and deeply value their critical role in protecting Canadians.ThanksReasoning · 12 wordsWe need to continue to protect Canadians’ nature, environment and emergency preparedness.Promise · 29 wordsWe continue to ensure Canada’s national parks and heritage are preserved, safe and managed right to serve both Canadians and our environment, and we will continue to do that.Partly on pointVague promise