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Connie Cody

66 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Kent MacDonald (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, one of the first constituents I met upon getting elected lost their son to sextortion. This bill and our ability to get it right are very important to me and to the many parents out there who are living the nightmare of losing a child to this terrible plague. I would ask the member across the way if she supports sending this bill to committee, hearing from experts and trying to get it right for all Canadians who are suffering?”
Statement grade
B+
83 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Reasoning 64%Claims 21%The ask 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 13 wordsI completely sympathize with parents who have gone through things like coercion, extortion, Claims · 14 wordsand online harms and scams. We are seeing this happen and it is escalating. The ask · 10 wordsIt is something that needs to be discussed at committee. Reasoning · 29 wordsWe need to find a way to protect not only our children but families.Vague promise As technology is growing, we need to move in a way that looks at everything.Vague promise

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