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Chi Nguyen

72 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Rechie Valdez (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, one of the things the hon. member mentioned was the documentary Miss Representation: Rise Up, which I had the opportunity of watching. In it, there were a couple of stories of incredible young women, and what they were experiencing online was deeply disturbing. In terms of the new legislation, the digital safety act and the digital safety commission of Canada act, I wonder what the member would like to say on this that would help address some of the concerns of those young women in the documentary.”
Statement grade
D+
52 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 14%Reasoning 86%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 10 wordsthe minister and I really enjoyed watching the film together.1Partly on point Reasoning · 62 wordsAt this time when many young women are thinking about what it means to step into and engage in democracy, we have a responsibility to step forward and make sure we get this right.Vague promise There are real threats to Canadian democracy, and we want to make sure we can all participate safely.Vague promise What we are doing here sets the groundwork for that.Vague promise

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