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Michelle Rempel Garner

190 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Steeve Lavoie (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I thank my colleague for her important speech on this bill, which is also important. I listened carefully to her speech and I noticed that she repeated “why” a lot. I do not know how many times she repeated that word. That immediately made me think of the status quo. People often ask why we are not doing this or why we are not doing that. Some parents are saying that enough is enough with the status quo and that we need to move forward. Parents watching at home, who, like me, have seen how much things have changed in recent years, are concerned. They want the government to make decisions and move forward. Often, when we ask “why” too much, years go by and nothing gets done. Does my colleague agree that the government should be able to help parents? Does she agree that this bill needs to move forward so we can develop guidelines to help parents properly raise their children?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 97 / 100
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Procedure 4%The question 36%Claims 44%The ask 16%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI will counter my colleague with this: ProcedureThe question · 68 wordsWhy did the government not use my bill, 1which I wrote as a private member, in spite of it having 800,000 bureaucrats who could have done the job for it years ago?2 Why is the government so insistent on putting detail-free bills in the House of Commons? Why does the government presuppose that, in order to protect kids online, Canadians have to go forward without answers to questions? Claims · 84 wordsI put forward a bill almost three years ago that answered the questions I asked today.3 The government could have stolen that bill. I had hoped it would. I have said that many times. The reality is that the government did not, 4Unearned certaintyand we are sitting here today because it has put forward bad iterations of legislation that Canadians have opposed. Canadians want their kids kept safe online. They know that the government has dragged its feet in putting forward legislation that does that. The ask · 31 wordsI think it is incumbent upon the government to answer questions on whether or not this bill will actually work and whether it will keep Canadians’ speech and privacy safe online.

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