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Michelle Rempel Garner

252 words · 16 sentences · 21 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I understand the member believes that her private member’s bill is perfect legislation, that there is absolutely nothing wrong with it and that it should have received royal assent by now. Having said that, I think it is a universally held belief among all members of Parliament of all political stripes that there is a need to take some action. Yes, the bill does not provide all the details the member talked about in her comments, but today we are dealing with the principle of the legislation. Many of the questions she has posed will be answered once the bill gets to the committee stage. We are not going to incorporate all the things the member has put on the record in a piece of legislation and then present it. It would be a 1,500-page bill if we listened to the member’s comments. Does the member support the principle of having a commission?”
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Average 86 / 100
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Procedure 3%Claims 60%Aside 3%Reasoning 17%Positioning 13%Promise 4%

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Procedure · 8 wordsI do not know about you, Madam Speaker, ProcedureClaims · 21 wordsbut I sure do not like it when a man tells me what I said when I did not say it. Aside · 8 wordsI am sure you would sympathize with that.Aside Claims · 129 wordsWhat I have said in the past is that my bill was a starting point three years ago, 12and it is not 1,500 pages; it is about 30 pages.3 It clearly outlines the duty of care that online operators would have.4 What the Liberals and the minister are saying is that all of the hundreds of thousands of bureaucrats we have could not possibly have written a bill that tells Canadians exactly what the bill would do. They could not possibly have done that. They are asking Parliament to devolve the power we have to unelected bureaucrats who would be making these decisions at the table with tech giants. That is what they are asking for, and I am saying no. The residents of Calgary Nose Hill want answers. Reasoning · 22 wordsI am asking these questions because it was entirely possible for the government to have a bill that had answers in it.Partly on point Positioning · 34 wordsThe member is wrong and he knows it.Motive imputed He has been around long enough.Partly on point I will not have that man try to say that I said something that I did not. That is preposterous.Positioning Promise · 10 wordsHowever, I will demand answers on behalf of my constituents, Reasoning · 20 wordsbecause this matters and we have to get it right. If we do not answer these questions, we will not.Partly on point

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