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Danielle Martin

107 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Amarjeet Gill (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the hon. member mentioned mental health, anxiety and other harms that are happening to our kids and our children. Parents have the greatest responsibility for protecting their children, but parents cannot control hidden algorithms or the decisions high-tech billionaire companies are taking with regard to these platforms that are available to everyone. How would Bill C-34 empower parents so that they can protect their children?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 25%Reasoning 42%Promise 30%Procedure 3%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 27 wordsof course parents have primary responsibility for their children.Partly on point We also know that parents are no match for these tech giants whose strategies are evolving every day.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 16 wordsIt is important that we have regulation of those companies and that we hold them accountable. Promise · 32 wordsThere needs to be ongoing public education for children and youth, parents, teachers and caregivers, as well as the people who are coaching our kids in sports and beyond in our communities, Reasoning · 29 wordsso that we all know how to recognize the signs that a kid is in trouble, whether it is in the digital world or in the real life world, Partly on pointProcedure · 3 wordsas we say.Procedure

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