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Danielle Martin

65 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Madam Speaker, I have been struggling with Bill C-34 since it was first introduced. I think the minister is terrific. I know the intent of the bill is great, but it is a lot of blank space. One part that really worries me is clause 85, which I will read. It is short. It says, “The purpose of a penalty is to promote compliance with this Act and not to punish.” In the case of criminal responsibility and people who have fallen on hard times, I do not think our criminal justice system should focus on punishment. In dealing with these corporations, I want to kill them. I would like to pull their corporate right. I am not acting as a policy wonk here. I am an enraged mother. I want to punish them. Why does this bill not suggest strict liability? Why does it not suggest that a CEO whose company engages in a proven harm, such as Amanda Todd’s death, go to jail?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 22%Positioning 32%Reasoning 46%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsI think the member’s enraged state reflects how many parents in this country feel.Partly on point Positioning · 21 wordsOf course we want to see tech giants held accountable. Particularly where catastrophic outcomes occur, there have to be appropriate consequences.PositioningVague promise Reasoning · 30 wordsI do not know if we need to necessarily go as far as that, as killing the CEO, or whatever the member said, but the purpose of any regulation is—

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