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Garnett Genuis

160 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, after listening to my colleague, I realize that we both care about protecting our children online. I think that if we did not care about this issue, we would not be here tonight at this late hour. Bill C‑34 proposes several improvements to better regulate social media platforms in order to protect young people from harmful online content that could have an impact on their mental health. If my colleague supports the bill’s guiding principles and the broad objectives it seeks to achieve, will he vote to send it to committee so that it can be studied in depth?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Reasoning
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 11%Claims 23%Reasoning 24%Promise 42%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 18 wordsgenuinely, it is always a challenge when we are asked to rule on the objectives of a bill.Procedure Claims · 6 wordsI agree with the stated objectives. Reasoning · 13 wordsIf a stated objective is to protect children, I agree with protecting children. Claims · 31 wordsI have a lot of questions about the architecture of the bill and whether it achieves its objectives. I look forward to the study that is going to happen at committee. Promise · 26 wordsI hope we have a detailed and robust study. I hope we are able to see amendments to address some of the issues around the architecture. Reasoning · 25 wordsI think action is required to protect kids online.No reason given The status quo is not acceptable.No reason given We need new robust responses by government to this challenge.No reason given Promise · 41 wordsI hope that through the process of debate, refinement and amendment, we can get to a piece of legislation that answers all the questions that I and other members have and achieves the objective that we are all saying we want.

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