“Mr. Speaker, I believe that there are parents and grandparents in the House this evening. I listened carefully to my colleague. She said that some improvements are needed. Can my colleague clarify what changes she would like to see to improve Bill C‑34?”
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Promise 33%Claims 54%Reasoning 13%
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Mr. Speaker, Promise · 27 wordsyes, I have a lot of ideas and I hope to be able to propose amendments in committee, especially when it comes to punishing social media platforms.Vague promiseClaims · 44 wordsFurthermore, there are precedents.I want to mention quickly that if we look at what we do with anti-spam legislation in Canada, that is attaching to directors their behaviour.1If they are aware of this conduct and they direct it, they are personally liable.Reasoning · 11 wordsThat is the kind of thing that really gets their attention.