“Mr. Speaker, I really appreciated my colleague’s speech. In our riding of Taiaiako’n—Parkdale—High Park, we held a round table, as well as a round table with the member for University—Rosedale. The member mentioned a gathering he is hosting in Scarborough—Woburn on Friday. I wonder if he could share more details about why he has chosen to engage parents in this way and what he expects to hear.”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 65, 30 above Relevance.
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 24%Claims 37%Promise 19%Reasoning 21%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsI have the best constituency team in the country.There are incredible people working in my office, PositioningOff pointClaims · 37 wordsand they have engaged with psychologists, doctors, educators, superintendents, youth workers and folks from faith groups.We are asking them to come and meet with us to go over pieces of this legislation and to get feedback.Promise · 24 wordsWe will collect a bunch of data points, put them together and present it to the minister on behalf of the people in Scarborough—Woburn.Positioning · 13 wordsIt is a simple model that we have been using more and more.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 9 wordsWe just did one on the fresh water review.1Off pointReasoning · 26 wordsIt seems to be a model we can use to make sure that the voices in our community are collected and presented back to the government.Partly on point