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Michael Coteau

116 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to William Stevenson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the member talked about the number of hours we are online, and I, too, would be afraid to look at my hours online. Can the member expand on what he thinks would help to avoid some of the problems they had in Australia, where a lot of the youth are just going around this? How would Bill C-34 address any of the problems they had in Australia?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
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Claims 78%Reasoning 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsthis bill is different from what took place in Australia.2 In Australia, there was a complete ban.1 Reasoning · 26 wordsI think this bill is a realistic approach. We are not going to be able to just ban social media. It is not going to work. Claims · 73 wordsWe are attempting to work with platforms to ensure that they put in place the right type of safeguards, 3Vague promiseand the onus is going to be on them to prove they are safe.4 If they are approved, then they will be open for young people to use. If they cannot reach those specific guidelines or safeguards, they will not be able to present their social media for use with young people in Canada.5

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