“Mr. Speaker, my colleague laid out a number of ways that the bill could be improved and a number of things that the government should pay attention to in moving forward. I would like to ask my colleague to share a bit more about what he is hearing in his community and the concerns various groups may have.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 37 wordsI have to admit this is not the major issue that I am hearing in my riding.There are a lot of concerns about everything today with regard to being in Alberta.Partly on pointWe have had referendum issues, 1Anecdote · 14 wordswhich have sucked all the energy out of the room for quite a while.AnecdoteOff pointClaims · 13 wordsParents talk to me about what we are looking at in the future, Reasoning · 34 wordsbut they are always concerned that if there is going to be overreach, how these restrictions are going to affect the rest of society versus the balancing act with regard to protecting our children.