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Ryan Turnbull

157 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Tamara Kronis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I was glad to hear the parliamentary secretary acknowledge the drivers behind some of the increases in the consumer price index in this country, the CPI, but the reality is that the price of food continues to grow at an inflationary rate that exceeds the CPI. The government comes up with program after program, yet there is a lack of measurables, KPIs and clear targets they can be measured against. Given that in the parliamentary secretary’s own community demand has become so intense that last year there had to be incredible expansion in the number of slots, my question is this: How will these programs work, by how much and by when, and how will Canadians know that this billion-dollar fund actually lowered their costs?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Procedure 6%Claims 52%Thanks 4%Positioning 15%Reasoning 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsagain, it is more than just a billion-dollar fund.Procedure Claims · 46 wordsIt is $3.2 billion.1 The local food infrastructure fund has already made a significant difference in my community. There are organizations, mostly non-profits and charities, in my community that offer solutions at a community scale to the food insecurity challenges we see rising in our communities.Partly on point Thanks · 6 wordsThey are doing a great job.Thanks Claims · 19 wordsWhat we are doing is boosting their efforts by offering more financing and support directly from the federal government, Positioning · 24 wordswhich arguably is something we have not had before and is probably the missing piece to really addressing the root causes of food insecurity.Positioning Reasoning · 36 wordsEvery expert in the country will tell us that food insecurity is the direct result of income insecurity.Logical leapUnearned certainty Therefore, really, the long-term solution to food insecurity is to make sure we have high-paying jobs in Canada. Claims · 17 wordsWages have been outpacing inflation in Canada.2 The Canadian economy has added twice the number of jobs—Partly on point

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