Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Stephanie Kusie

1214 words · 66 sentences · 86 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 91 / 100
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Greeting 2%Anecdote 13%Positioning 8%Claims 53%Promise 2%Reasoning 16%Procedure 5%The ask 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordsit is always an honour and a pleasure to rise in the House as the voice of Calgary Midnapore.Greeting Anecdote · 80 wordsI am so grateful for my citizens. Many of my citizens, including my parents, of course, and myself, are parents. When we talk about being a parent, we may have many other titles and roles in our lives. We may be a sister or a cousin. In our work, we have many roles. We may be a colleague, perhaps a subordinate or even a leader, a boss, someone who has to take the care and responsibility of others into consideration.AnecdotePartly on point Positioning · 63 wordsI know that any parent, not only in Calgary Midnapore but across Canada, would agree that there is nothing more important than their role as a parent and the safety of their children. We all love our children. I cannot think of anything more dear or precious to me than my son, and I know all parents feel this way about their children.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 14 wordsIt should be known to Canadians that protecting kids online is non-negotiable for Conservatives. Positioning · 22 wordsHowever, good intentions require sound mechanisms. We must be focused on holding tech giants accountable and empowering parents, not expanding government bureaucracy.Positioning Promise · 20 wordsAs this bill moves to committee, we will scrutinize its provisions to ensure that it delivers real protection for children. Anecdote · 18 wordsAs a parent, I want nothing more than that for our children and for the parents of Canada.Anecdote Claims · 6 wordsOnline harms are a real problem, Reasoning · 5 wordsand the problem is twofold. Claims · 8 wordsNumber one, children are exposed to addictive platforms. Anecdote · 14 wordsI see this in my household, and when friends come over, all the time.Anecdote Claims · 25 wordsThere is inappropriate content, exploitation and many other harms. Secondly, parents are overwhelmed by rapidly changing technology and fighting an uphill battle against big tech. Anecdote · 37 wordsThis was never more prevalent than during COVID, when all parents across the nation all of a sudden had to become IT consultants, so to speak, Partly on pointas they navigated schooling for their children during that difficult time.Anecdote Procedure · 4 wordsThese are real problems.Procedure Claims · 83 wordsAccording to Statistics Canada, one in four children aged 12 to 17 has experienced cyber-bullying, 1and police reported online child sexual exploitation incidents reaching 16,905 in 2024, up 347% from 2014.2 Cyber-victimization is also associated with serious mental health outcomes, including suicidal ideation and attempts. Canada has experienced the devastating impacts and real-world consequences of online harms. The tragic case of Amanda Todd, who died by suicide after experiencing sextortion and cyber-bullying, illustrates the devastating impact these harms can have on young people.3 Procedure · 12 wordsIn addition, I have two examples from my home province of Alberta.Procedure Claims · 58 wordsDated September 25, the headline on the first article states, “After 2 youths stalked on Snapchat, review your kid’s settings, police urge”.4 The article reads, “Police in Alberta are urging parents to check the location settings on their children’s social media and communication apps after two youth allegedly being sexually exploited in Edmonton were followed to their homes.”5 Positioning · 5 wordsThis is outlining the threats.Positioning Claims · 23 words“‘The victims reported that they complied out of extreme fear for their safety and the safety of their family,’” again outlining the threats.6 Procedure · 3 wordsThe article continues: ProcedureClaims · 44 words“The suspect allegedly tracked the victim’s location via Snapchat and travelled to their family home.7 ALERT said they allegedly knew both the victims’ home address and what school they attended.”8 This is the type of threat that exists as a result of social media. Procedure · 10 wordsThat is one example from my home province of Alberta.Procedure Claims · 74 wordsThe headline on the second article says, “Edmonton teens, 14, charged after AI used to make sexualized images of classmates”.9 The article states, “Two Edmonton junior high students are facing child sexual exploitation charges for allegedly using AI to generate sexualized images of classmates.10 Such charges are only the tip of the iceberg in an emerging area of online child sex abuse, police say, adding it remains difficult to hold AI platforms themselves accountable.” Procedure · 5 wordsProblems for children are many, ProcedureClaims · 140 wordsand children spend a large portion of their lives online. For today’s youth, digital platforms are not separate from everyday life. This is where they socialize, build relationships, access information, express themselves and, increasingly, interact with AI. As a result, what happens online can have profound real-world consequences, including exposure to cyber-bullying, sexual exploitation, self-harm and eating disorder content, violence, and other harmful material.Partly on point Children are vulnerable to the ways that platforms are designed. Platform features, such as recommendation algorithms, push notifications, endless scrolling and autoplay can repeatedly direct youth towards content that keeps them engaged. These design choices can amplify exposure to harmful material and make it difficult for young users to disengage. At the same time, AI chatbots and digital companions are becoming increasingly integrated into the platforms used by young people, creating new and largely untested risks. Reasoning · 11 wordsIn addition to problems for children, there are problems for parents. Claims · 25 wordsParents cannot solve the problem alone, and they are asking for help. They can set boundaries, monitor devices and talk to children about online safety. Anecdote · 9 wordsWe have done all of this in my home, AnecdoteClaims · 22 wordsbut parents cannot control how platforms and algorithms recommend content, prevent strangers from contacting their children or remove harmful material at scale. Reasoning · 39 wordsParents need technology companies and governments to share responsibility for creating a safer online environment for children. We do not ask parents to enforce car seat standards or alcohol laws by themselves, and online safety should be no different. Claims · 28 wordsIn fact, according to an Angus Reid survey, 75% of Canadians, 11and 70% of parents with children in the home, support banning social media for youth under 16. Procedure · 11 wordsI will give an example in my province of such legislation.Procedure Claims · 15 wordsThis legislation exists not only in Alberta but also across other provinces in the federation. Procedure · 7 wordsOn June 17, 2024, it was decreed: 12ProcedureClaims · 72 wordsParents, teachers, students and our education partners were clear that the use of personal mobile devices and social media in the classroom was of concern.13 We’re taking a measured approach to protect students by restricting the use of personal mobile devices during instructional time to reduce distractions and bullying, maximize learning time and support student mental health.14 This is one province that has taken an approach to such threats and such risks, Procedure · 10 wordsbecause the threats, as I said, are very much real.Procedure Reasoning · 37 wordsWe need to consider also the duties of operators, because these operators have a duty to protect our children. They should require social media services and chatbot services to implement design features respecting the protection of children, Claims · 4 wordsas per future regulations.Partly on point Reasoning · 53 wordsThey should require social media services to implement age verification estimation to prevent users who are under 16 from setting up or maintaining accounts. As well, they should require regulated services that provide access to pornographic material to implement age verification or age estimation to prevent children from getting access to these platforms. Claims · 8 wordsThese operators have a duty to act responsibly. Reasoning · 48 wordsThey should require social media services and chatbots to assess and mitigate the risks associated with several categories of harmful content. As well, they have a duty to make certain that certain content is inaccessible and require social media services to take down content that sexually victimizes children. Positioning · 8 wordsOur Conservative principles regarding online safety are clear, PositioningThe ask · 15 wordsand as a parent and as a mother, I ask the government to consider them.

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