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Stephanie Kusie

100 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to John Barlow (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, at the beginning of the member’s speech, she mentioned that, although the bill is well-intentioned and there are some good elements to it, one of her concerns was the potential of adding additional bureaucracy, which could slow down some of the things we are trying to accomplish with the bill, certainly in ensuring that the tools are there for our law enforcement to act on these things. Could the member build on some of her concerns regarding other elements of the bill, including the bureaucracy, that are a concern to our stakeholders?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 5%Procedure 9%Claims 77%Reasoning 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsthat is an excellent question.Thanks Procedure · 9 wordsThere are three concerns when it comes to bureaucracy.Procedure Claims · 77 wordsThe first, of course, is that bureaucracy always has a price, and with this government, it is a very big one. Second, a bureaucracy allows the government and the ministers to deflect responsibility back onto the bureaucracy when they themselves should be taking responsibility, especially in a situation where something so precious as our children is involved. Finally, a bureaucracy gives unelected officials power to harm people. I am very concerned about the bureaucratic aspects of this, Reasoning · 9 wordsbecause as we can see, the risks are many.Partly on point

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