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Vincent Ho

88 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Ruby Sahota (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the member said that success should not be measured by mere compliance. Well, if these companies comply with this bill, I believe we can say that is success because they would have a duty to act responsibly, a duty to protect children and a duty to make certain contact inaccessible. Would the member agree that that would be success?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 50%Claims 40%Reasoning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsthat Liberal member clearly has not heard the entire speech, PositioningOff pointUnearned certaintyClaims · 14 wordsbecause what I said was “mere compliance should not be the measure of success.” Reasoning · 9 wordsIt is the outcomes that we need to measure. Claims · 21 wordsWe can see that in the Australian context where they have a lot of compliance but not a lot of results. Positioning · 34 wordsThat seems to be a theme that the Liberal government likes to follow. It wants to announce and announce, comply and comply, Off pointand create these legislative frameworks with no results to show for them.Positioning

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