Replying to Marianne Dandurand (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague from Madawaska—Restigouche gave a very eloquent speech about about Bill C-34. I want to elaborate on what he said and talk about cellular connectivity, because my colleague and I face the same challenge with regard to cellular connectivity in the regions. That is an issue that we are working on together. I would like him to talk about the importance of cellular connectivity in the regions, which will enable everyone to connect to social media.”
Statement grade
D+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 65. The grade is held to 54, 30 above Relevance.
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordsas my colleague mentioned, it is always a pleasure to work with her on this issue affecting our rural communities.ThanksReasoning · 15 wordsAccess to technology and online platforms depends on stable and reliable access to cellular networks.Promise · 20 wordsI am pleased to co-sponsor her bill on cellular connectivity to give priority to underserviced regions in future tendering processes.1Off pointReasoning · 21 wordsI would say that this is also a critical issue because it is a matter of safety for our young people.Positioning · 9 wordsWe are talking here about protecting our young people.PositioningClaims · 7 wordsMost of them have cellphones these days, Reasoning · 8 wordsso they need access to reliable cellular networks.Promise · 35 wordsWe are working together to see what can be done not only in terms of investments, Vague promisebut also in terms of federal regulations, to support technologies that would significantly improve cellular connectivity in our regions.Off pointVague promise