“Mr. Speaker, I think it has actually been quite a productive debate this morning on this very important piece of legislation. It is obviously an issue of public policy, but I think, for many of us, it is also a personal issue. I have young children. They are nine years and six years old, so they are still too young to be in the online world, which is a positive thing, but of course all of us as parents, uncles, aunts or whatever the case might be, want to make sure children are protected. I think the member raises some interesting points. Is it her intention and the intention of the Conservative Party to support this legislation at second reading so it can move to committee and get the detailed study that I think we all agree it deserves?”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsas the member has children aged nine and six, I commend him that they are not on online platforms already, PositioningReasoning · 19 wordsbecause it is a difficult task as a parent to make sure their kids are protected in that way.Claims · 16 wordsI would say that Conservatives, on the whole, want to make sure the balance is struck.Partly on pointVague promiseProcedure · 15 wordsThat means the bill has to be studied in committee and be examined very closely.ProcedurePositioning · 16 wordsWe want to make sure kids are protected, Vague promisebut we need to get the balance right.PositioningPartly on point