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Abdelhaq Sari

119 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Peter Schiefke (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my hon. colleague for his speech and the extraordinary work he does to serve his constituents. I would ask my colleague to tell the House and the parents and young people in his riding why it is important for us to adopt Bill C-34. What will this do to better protect Canadians, especially young Canadians?”
Statement grade
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Average 85 / 100
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Thanks 12%Procedure 3%Claims 48%Reasoning 37%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI thank my colleague, who represents the riding neighbouring mine, for that great question.Thanks Procedure · 4 wordsIt is very simple.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsAs I mentioned, I have a 14-year-old son.Partly on point We know full well that when a toy is dangerous, it is taken off the market and off of store shelves.Unearned certainty My son spends most of his time in front of a screen.Partly on point Reasoning · 38 wordsI think we need to address this issue much more seriously. I cannot ask parents in Bourassa and across Canada to monitor their children’s online activities 24 hours a day, seven days a week. That is virtually impossible. Claims · 16 wordsHowever, the platforms have the means to do so, they have the algorithms to do so, Reasoning · 6 wordsand they must do just that.

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