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Abdelhaq Sari

78 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Helena Konanz (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, children need real protection online. Is Bill C‑34 the best solution? This method is not working in Australia.”
Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 18%Procedure 9%Claims 53%Positioning 6%The ask 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI want to thank my colleague for asking her question in such elegant French.Thanks Procedure · 3 wordsI appreciate it.Procedure Claims · 13 wordsThe unique thing about this bill is that it is a world first. Positioning · 5 wordsIt is a step forward, PositioningThe ask · 11 wordsand I hope that everyone here will vote to support it. Procedure · 4 wordsThere are three aspects.Procedure Claims · 28 wordsAustralia did not regulate all of the aspects I listed in my speech, including the issue of social media, AI and platforms, as well as safety by design.

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