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Marilyn Gladu

67 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Marianne Dandurand (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I first want to commend my colleague from Sarnia—Lambton—Bkejwanong for her outstanding work. I was honestly quite touched to hear her talk about her experience. She has been very courageous in all of this. I am very pleased to have her on our team. As I said, she is doing a great job. That said, she mentioned at the beginning of her speech that there were other versions of this legislation that were not as good as this one. I would like her to tell us about the main ways in which this bill improves on them and what she likes most about this version of this very important bill.”
Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 61%Aside 16%Reasoning 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 41 wordsthere was something unacceptable in the previous versions. The first two versions said that if somebody thought a person was going to commit a hate crime in the future, that person could be put in prison for up to 25 years.1 Aside · 11 wordsThat seemed, to me, very much like the movie Minority Report.Aside Reasoning · 15 wordsIt is certainly not charter-compliant, 2so I am glad to see that it was removed.Hidden agency

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